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Posted in Uncategorized by Wayne on March 31, 2017

Weekend-Bella-Journey

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  1. quiverquotes said, on March 31, 2017 at 7:12 AM

    I’m in a phase where run on sentences don’t have to be that bad … They can speed up the prose or give a more clipped feeling to the action, and they aren’t as intrusive if they’re consistently used, in otherwise clear writing. But, as I say, it’s probably just a (bad) phase.

    • Wayne said, on March 31, 2017 at 5:30 PM

      I love a great long sentence! And there is a difference between a great long sentence and a run on.
      Oh… Thanks for your comment! I appreciate it.

      • quiverquotes said, on March 31, 2017 at 5:38 PM

        I just realised that in my mind “run-on” sentences equated to “comma splice”, which is only a special case. Whoops! So, what I said — about the clipped feeling and speeding up action — was meant for the comma splice … But I agree, long sentences can be very satisfying in general, as long as they “work” in which ever context they’re used.

  2. Widdershins said, on March 31, 2017 at 1:49 PM

    With the sleeves of their shirts hanging out of their suitcases. 🙂


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